Some people think that children should begin their formal
education at an early age and should most of their time on school
studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their
time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with?
Why?
Sample TOEFL essay answer:
Childhood is one of the most important and memorable periods of
our lives. We come into the world innocent and unaware and in just a
few short years make great physical and mental progress. Although play
is an important component of our young lives, in my view, there are
significant benefits to be gained from beginning formal education at an
early age. My view is based on intellectual and social reasons.
Intellectually, the period from birth to six years is the
most significant for brain growth. A child who is surrounded by a rich
multi-sensory environment develops infinitely more connection between
brain cells, which are the basis of what we call “intelligence”. In this
connection, the process of learning to read is of particular
significance because it has such a strong positive influence on neural
development. Although parents can provide this early intellectual
stimulation, in most cases working parents find it difficult to do so.
This strengthens the case for enrolling children in a formal education
system, which can provide the necessary resources and trained personnel
to bring out the best in the child.
Socially, being in a school environment teaches children both
how to behave themselves and also how to get along with other children
and adults. These lessons in human behaviour are as important as the
formal subjects a child must study. By learning how to follow rules,
take turns and be respectful a child becomes a part of the social nexus
to which we all belong. The formal academic experience, in an objective
context, away from the family structure, also satisfies the child’s
growing sense of independence. Most children often “play school” in any
case, particularly if they have older siblings.
In conclusion, early education offers children a host of
benefits at different levels. A child can always play after coming home;
in the meantime, the school experience sets the child on a path to
success and self-confidence in a competitive, demanding world.
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