Why I write in English?
By:
Nilam W., Thailand
I just
want to share what I have.
Said
what I think and feel.
Practice
English as English is not my native language.
When I
write like as right now,
I just
follow my heart what I want to say,
The
words just come out.
I am
just transferring what my soul said.
I just
follow my finger.
What is
in my mind?
And the
most important one, right now,
I am
struggling with my thesis writing. Aha.
I just
need media to share,
Word
press is the good one.
Oh
Dear….
I do
not know how to improve my English within two months or soon.
Anyway
my biggest dream is be a writer, special book for kids.
Good
night friends!
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1. when you use parallel
structure, use the same structure.
I just
want to share what I have.
Said
what I think and feel.
I just want
to share what I have, and say what I think and feel.
Don't make
a sentence without a subject and a verb. <-- this is fundamental in English
formal writing.
That's why
I merged the phrase 'said what I think and feel' to the preceding sentence.
When I
write like as right now,
I just
follow my heart what I want to say,
replace
'like as' with 'like', use present continuous will be appropriate since you
were actually writing when you wrote that sentence ^_^
you need to have a lot of drill in tenses so that you can get the picture of 'timing' in English and use proper verbs.
you need to have a lot of drill in tenses so that you can get the picture of 'timing' in English and use proper verbs.
I'd say:
"When
I am writing like right now, I just follow what my heart tells me to say."
I just
follow my finger.
I'd say:
I just
follow my fingers.
We write
use more than one finger, don't we?
In English, we have to be careful in using noun. Even until now, I sometimes find it difficult to determine whether a noun is countable or uncountable. So, knowledge about noun is quite important in English.
In English, we have to be careful in using noun. Even until now, I sometimes find it difficult to determine whether a noun is countable or uncountable. So, knowledge about noun is quite important in English.
I do
not know how to improve my English within two months or soon.
I do not
know how to improve my English within two months or less.
Anyway
my biggest dream is be a writer, special book for kids.
use proper
punctuation: any connector, adverbial phrase, or adverbial clause that comes up
before a subject should be separated by a comma.
I'd say:
I'd say:
Anyway, my
biggest dream is to be a writer, especially books for children/kids. (or)
Anyway, my
biggest dream is to write books especially for children/kids.
special
book = book that is special
especially
books for kids = to give an example
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